young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty and animal welfare than previous generations. what is your own opinion.
In this date and age, it is said that more and more young generations are more interested in social problems such as the environment, catastrophic, poverty or animal rights than their previous generations. I think this statement has two sides: one side is true, another one is not.
In this technology era, people easily access to a great amount of information: from the ancient knowledge to the hottest news in the morning; all information you need is just a click a mouse. therefore, youngers are becoming more and more curious about social matters, especially these related to our environment because these problems appear everywhere in our daily life: from news on TV to status in social media. from this reason, these issues have an important roles in our daily conversations, so if anyone do not care about them, they are hard to converse to others and they will be left behind; therefore, a lot of young generation aware of social matters. the second explanation to this statement is young people have more time and energy than adult or elderly, so they can catch up with the latest news faster than the others. for example, when a matter of animal abusing appears on the internet, the first generation reacting to this problem is youngers. the reason for this can be easily seen that they have a lot of spare time, while the previous ones do not have enough time to relax after a long working day, let alone taking notice to problems which they can not solve quickly.
On the other hand, young people not only care about social problems but also rumors or fake news. And adults and elderly are not uninterested in social matters, they just spend less time than younger generation. They still read newspapers in the morning or spend their break searching hottest social issues around the world. They just do not react to news as fast as young people because of their lack of time and flexibility in catching up with new information about these matters. However, when previous generations talk about these problems, they will discuss them from many sides, on the contrary, young generations just have talk in two sides of the problems, for instance the problem of pollution, young people just say how harmful they will cause in our lives, they do not discuss the reasons or the causes of this matter while the previous ones do
To sum up, youngers become more aware of social issues than the previous ones, however, they still have to learn a lot of experience from the predecessors to avoid believing fake news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78440366972 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4742083435 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479357798165 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.293737298 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.461538462 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5384615385 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206848211976 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827801173527 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065698647873 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150984861928 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02185402662 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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