Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
In this digital age, reading news on the Internet tends to become popular. However, many traditionalists argue that newspapers will continue as the major source of news. I personally disagree with this view.
The factors of the Internet which have led to the increasing popularity of online news are the speed and convenience. Firstly, the Internet is able to provide up-to-minute news or even in real time as it happens. In order to surf the websites and access news, all needs are simply having a portable device such as smart phone or laptop which connects almost constantly to the internet. Secondly, there is an increase in the quantity of access the Internet and this trend appears set to continue. The more widespread the accessibility of the Internet corresponding the more people rely on it as their news source. In addition, the free cost of reading could be a consideration for people choose to read online as a priority.
In contrast, the popularity of newspapers is possibly declined due to its drawbacks. The cost of a news source is one major disincentive. Competing with freely available news online, the falling circulation figures is a real problem which newspapers publishers cannot avoid. Some major American newspapers have attempted to introduce online versions alongside their printed editions so as to arrest this trend. An amount of newspapers consumed is probably another drawback due to the growing awareness of people about the environment. There is a body of public opinion which rejects buying newspapers since this involves cutting trees and transporting them to paper mills. The environmental argument will certainly gain ground if the consumption of newspapers may not be a major factor at present.
In conclusion, I believe that the importance of newspapers will continue to drop, more and more people will use the Internet to access news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255255255255 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.162162162162 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0870870870871 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048048048048 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.024024024024 0.0437548338989 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.045045045045 0.0403226058552 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92725380429 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.042042042042 0.0326793684256 129% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.126126126126 0.0861772015684 146% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.021021021021 0.021408717616 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012012012012 0.011925033212 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1879.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1606557377 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393442622951 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295081967213 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.23606557377 0.203846283523 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140983606557 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92725380429 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554098360656 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.2354986261 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9411764706 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8874561966 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.4493731919 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.75641025641 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430284533019 0.332605444948 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0878923618753 0.102741220458 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0538479658003 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554870301244 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15178055392 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184224553641 0.134430193775 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113330092046 0.0742795772207 153% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.394519337163 0.324371583561 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0582088145525 0.0638462369009 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329745716697 0.228012699653 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646911231568 0.058150111329 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.