Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that job satisfaction is much more important than salary.
First of all, I believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfillment that no money can guarantee. Even if someone is earning a high salary, but feels tensed and compromises with his conscience, this person won’t enjoy his life. While pursuing one’s interests will always bring pleasure and feeling of satisfaction. For example, a lot of famous researchers made their career choices not because of appealing wages, but because they were passionate about science. That’s why it’s more important to choose the kind of work that makes you happy than to look only at a high salary.
Secondly, doing what you like keeps you motivated and therefore leads to a career growth. In other words, there is a strong relation between job satisfaction and productivity. People who love their jobs can easily excel in their fields of work and achieve better results than those, who put salary on the first place. For instance, Henry Miller decided to leave his everyday job despite a good wage and ventured to become a writer. And after enduring years of ups and downs he became one of the most famous and well-paid authors of the twentieth century. Thus, advantages of jobs that keep you satisfied outweigh the drawback of a low salary in a long-term perspective.
To conclude, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is more beneficial than high salary because it makes people happy and motivated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...choose a job with high wage, even if it doesnt appeal to you at all. I completely disa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'first of all', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225705329154 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.150470219436 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0783699059561 0.0946595960268 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0564263322884 0.0501214627716 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0689655172414 0.0437548338989 158% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.131661442006 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.025078369906 0.0403226058552 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73082203602 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025078369906 0.0326793684256 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0721003134796 0.0861772015684 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00940438871473 0.021408717616 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0188087774295 0.011925033212 158% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1645.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93862815884 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353790613718 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249097472924 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173285198556 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126353790614 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73082203602 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 63.8231773572 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7857142857 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.371589646 49.517814964 37% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.814263465372 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 44.6954615781 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.38636363636 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201297634879 0.332605444948 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0682966027257 0.102741220458 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0554226795129 0.0668466124924 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.504658872038 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185282353868 0.148594505496 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895301037011 0.134430193775 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884527959432 0.0742795772207 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.26752064937 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0568896452165 0.0638462369009 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169517744663 0.228012699653 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793232265138 0.058150111329 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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