Computers have made a better and safer world. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, computers have increasingly been popular around the world. Many people think that computers have a pivotal impact on daily lives because of creating a safer and better place. While I agree that using computers provide a better life than before, I do not agree that computers have made the world safer.
On the one hand, I suppose that the invention of computers play a vital role in making a better life. Firstly, computers can be considered as effective learning tools for those who have no chance to enter university or courses in contemporary. For instant, students can have access to the huge amount of information on the internet through websites such as Wikipedia, Khan’s Academy, Code Academy and so forth. Secondly, with the help of computers and the Internet, people can talk to friends, relatives and partners that are living overseas, leading to the easy connections between people all over the world.
However, I suppose that computers result in the danger of our safety. It is noted that the number of cybercrimes has increased since 2000, they hacked numerous the credit card numbers and they stole important data from big organizations. Take The US as an example, there were many sophisticated cyberattacks attacking on government computers and hacking attempts of the CIA’s main computer in 2016, which is big threat to the US government security. Besides, many people utilize computers to store data that are related to their business, their learning. If their computers are stolen or get infected with a virus, all data are likely to be lost completely.
In conclusion, although I think that our lives become better than before with the advent of computers, I believe that computers bring many problems related to our secure.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10309278351 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73474322645 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5092903008 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.230769231 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323943291991 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119416290112 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141117604522 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204506782041 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188912183351 0.056905535591 332% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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