Crime
Some people believe that in these days, the number and the violence of criminals are rising in various nations. This essay will take a closer look at some major causes and effective solutions for this issue.
There are some main reasons for this phenomenon. Firstly, as a result of overpopulation in these modern days, the increasing high competitiveness in job markets can lead to the underemployment and then causes more unemployeds who have low living standards. Those people, when becoming pessimistic, tend to do negative activities or even be criminals, such as thieves, burglars and drug dealers in order to make ends meet. For example, the Philippines, which is a small poor country with over 100 million citizens, has the biggest number of drug smugglers in the world that the Government has to impose capital punishment for any people relating to drugs. Secondly, due to the global cover of the internet and the popularity of computers and smartphones, the violent information and program which form people’s characteristics into criminals - especially the young generation, can be spread easier.In other words, criminals tend to become younger and more violent than before. For example, one of the most serious consequences is that the Vietnamese child who watched and played bloody games on the internet murdered his grandfather not allowing him to play these kinds of games anymore.
In my opinion, the Government should take some measures to tackle this issue effectively. Firstly, providing vocational training for unemployeds is the best way to ensure the good living standard for them and reduce the negative impacts of overpopulation. Secondly, they also should impose strict laws, such as the capital punishment, to encourage law-abiding citizens and prevent the violent or terrorist information and games from spreading on the internet. Lastly, investing in education to raise the sense of civic responsibility is the main and important solution.
In conclusion, there are some reasons for the increase of the number and violent level of criminals, I believe that a number of measures should be done by the authorities to overcome the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33430232558 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00689399018 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6351703644 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.153846154 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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