Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents.Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents.

Discuss both sides and give your opinion

One of the most common complaints of teachers all over the world is that of disciplinary issues. Students act out in a variety of ways, impacting their own ability to learn as well as those around them.Hence, a problem such as this is worth considering.

Managing disciplinary issues may be one of the most challenging aspects of teaching. The process of creating a calm and productive classroom environment starts with the teacher. Also, educators should consider the fact that not all students are coming from well-educated or responsible families. Therefore, not all of them are expected to behave well, and it is the duty of tutors to help them get what they haven’t been taught by their families, not to reprimand them all the time. After all, this is what the term ‘education’ means in the first place.

In the other hand, student misbehavior on this scale isn't always a result of poor management but instead stem from reasons outside the classroom. Even so, teachers could use classroom management techniques to structure actions inside their classroom, they weren't always able to change a student's life outside the school.
Economic instability, parental disharmony, poor home life, changes in family routine and relationships, and parental views on education and discipline .That's a lot of heavy baggage to carry on our journey of change and impact the student's ability to make good choices

As a result, Parents can't simply abandon their responsibilities at the school gate, they should take on the responsibility of teaching children morals and values such as respect for others and self, and appropriate social skills. Clearly,lack of parental support is also a major problem behind student lack of discipline.
To sum up, both teachers and supervisors ought to spend more time and energy on this critical topic.

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Average: 9.3 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, after all, even so, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14983713355 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82810824887 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622149837134 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.870961784 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => More facts,knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778264498029 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283634650521 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02310676441 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422950774689 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166923868567 0.056905535591 29% => paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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