Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
In this era, the number of crimes is increasing every year. There are several factors causing this issue, but the primary causes could be the emotional lifestyles. To solve this issue, the government can provide various programs where it helps people to handle the stresses and control their emotions.
There are various reasons for the incremental crime rates; however, the emotional distresses are the primary causes. As society develops into competitive markets, every day’s life becomes stressful. As a result of this, people have a lesser private time such as spending the time with friends and families, which causes emotional depression or distresses, it can express in a criminal way. In fact, according to the US statistics have found that in 2015's majority crime rates (over 80%) have involved with random and involuntary crimes, which have resulted of lose control of emotions. Therefore, this competitive and stressful world has created a criminal every year.
To solve this issue, there are several reasons at different levels - individual, family and societal levels. However, the most effective solutions would be the compulsory governmental programs which main purpose is helping people to manage their stress levels. Since majority of crimes are committed due to the burst and uncontrollable emotions, the programs to control of one's emotion becomes vital. If the government imposes these programs as a mandatory, there will be fewer crimes involve with emotional uncontrollable acts. Thus, the governmental helps on this matter is required at an immediate effect.
In conclusion, as society develops into a competitive world, the number of crimes is increasing every year. Even though there are various causes result this phenomenon, the primary reason would be the emotional managements. Since more people are responding extremely with their emotions, the crime acts would be inevitable. Therefore, the governmental programs involving emotional management seems the most effective and urgent approach to be placed.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254189944134 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.156424581006 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122905027933 0.0946595960268 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0251396648045 0.0501214627716 50% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0139664804469 0.0437548338989 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0921787709497 0.122226691241 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0418994413408 0.0403226058552 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.804747915 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0223463687151 0.0326793684256 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.117318435754 0.0861772015684 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0195530726257 0.021408717616 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111731843575 0.011925033212 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2040.0 1933.35771543 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.51757188498 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.450479233227 0.374742101984 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.348242811502 0.28420135186 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.23642172524 0.203846283523 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169329073482 0.137316102897 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.804747915 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514376996805 0.56093040696 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.488122299 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4117647059 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1576774508 49.517814964 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 53.236045856 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.98571428571 1.69124875643 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389250024641 0.332605444948 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0862676311217 0.102741220458 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0567336888676 0.0668466124924 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489472569251 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116462669302 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153023887234 0.134430193775 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649987041878 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.36108930825 0.324371583561 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0719612498796 0.0638462369009 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291293973766 0.228012699653 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374630200226 0.058150111329 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.