Economic growth and development are usually considered to be beneficial both for individuals and for society as a whole What are some advantages and disadvantages of economic development

Essay topics:

Economic growth and development are usually considered to be beneficial both for individuals and for society as a whole. What are some advantages and disadvantages of economic development?

Progress and increase in economic status are said to have positive effect for the community and the citizens as well. Opening lots of work opportunity seems to be the huge advantage of an improved economy, while overcrowding in the urban area would be the major drawback.

A rich economy means many investors would consider establishing new investments and businesses that could open job opportunity to the members of the society thus, decreasing the rate of unemployment. As a result of this, head of the family will be able to provide for the basic needs of their family such as food, education and health. For instance, in China, improvement in infrastructure are continuous making the Chinese unemployment rate to as low as 4.1% in 2015.

In contrast, a climb in the economic ladder has its drawback. Overcrowding in the metropolis is considered a negative effect. As the aftermath of more infrastructure and employment in the city, most people opt to move from the countryside to the city. Due to the aforementioned scenario, the metro will be congested. To cite an example, in Makati, the business center of the Philippines has the worst traffic jam in the said country because most of the employees would travel here at the same time in the morning.

To summarize, growth and development in the economy are acknowledged to be beneficial both for the society and members of the society. An increase employment rate is an advantage of this and congestion in the city would be the disadvantage.

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Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, thus, well, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99206349206 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06087971519 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3796750276 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241074140701 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821544762479 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911153472603 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146231117705 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808175228579 0.056905535591 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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