Essay topics: Some people think that education should help students to be useful to the whole society, while other people think that education should provide students with opportunities to archieve personal ambitious. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the wake of society development, education is believed to be the backbone of both individuals and nation. Whether literacy is for social purposes or personal achievements is worth examining. This essay would identify the pros and cons of each view before coming to reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that being educated will definitely enhance job opportunities for learners in today competitive world. In this regards, they will not be burdens of the society thank to their annual personal income taxes. Furthermore, learners would probably obtain to get knowledge and skills, which results in betterments of society. To illustrate, those who have been trained in Teaching Institution, will able to widespread knowledge to remote areas in order to assure the lowest rate of illiteracy. That is to say, although knowledge is for individual, education enables the abilities that help community.
By contrast, learning to build own faith, inner strength and courage is obvious priority. More precisely, education is regarded as useful tool which is borderless the accessibility. Those with knowledge prepared, especially meritorious students, will ease to approach accomplishment regardless of age, races or even genders. Take Mark Zerkenberg, founder of Facebook, as a particular example, he applied what he had learnt in university in doing business. Withstanding the test of time, Facebook has been one of the most favorable social applications downloaded, which brings enormous interest to the board management, Mark involving.
In conclusion, it can be said that education itself is useful tool for accessing world. Even though community may gain merits from learners, I believe it is supposed to first support individual goals on their own roads. By doing so, it will be no doubt foster greatly the development of a nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, in conclusion, no doubt, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42906574394 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05624294219 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.212315468 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136894893654 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439792884955 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367673798572 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818830852111 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226806127917 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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