Even though globalization affects the world's economics in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
We are living in a global village. The globalization has been happening all over the world and concerning positively to socio-economic development in each national . but almost everything has two sides and it is no exception.
First of all, the globalization bring profound changes . It makes some conditions for national are ability to exploit resources of each other’s development and promotes economic growth. Also , it expands market attract and attract foreign investment in each country. Moreover , advancing in economic development. Furthermore , it enlarges exchanges, strengthen economic , political and social, culture between relations and nations know each other better. For example,the Korean learns Vietnamese to find out Vietnamese culture. That is how they exchange refinement.
On the other hand , the globalization may also ham business industry of other countries that can not compete for as much versus the multinational companies. Thus , small business may have to close down. As a result, the globalization can lead to unemployment. Especially , it also leads to loss of national identily. For instance, the traditional way of life is getting away and people in developing countries are mimicking the western cultures. Globalization in some countries will cause a widening gap between rich and poor countries. In addition, another critical impact of globalizing is the danger of epidemic diseases which can easily spread because of faster transportation and increase in the number of tourists.
In general,there are many cons of globalization but the pros are more prominent and obvious.
so globalization needs to be improved on the negative side.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...over the world and concerning positively to socio-economic development in each na...
^^
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...io-economic development in each national . but almost everything has two sides and...
^^
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...economic development in each national . but almost everything has two sides and it ...
^^^
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the globalization bring profound changes . It makes some conditions for national a...
^^
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pment and promotes economic growth. Also , it expands market attract and attract ...
^^
Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...growth. Also , it expands market attract and attract foreign investment in each c...
^^
Line 2, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ign investment in each country. Moreover , advancing in economic development. Furt...
^^
Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing in economic development. Furthermore , it enlarges exchanges, strengthen econo...
^^
Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... enlarges exchanges, strengthen economic , political and social, culture between r...
^^
Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ions know each other better. For example,the Korean learns Vietnamese to find out Vi...
^^^^
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... exchange refinement. On the other hand , the globalization may also ham business...
^^
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...versus the multinational companies. Thus , small business may have to close down. ...
^^
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ion can lead to unemployment. Especially , it also leads to loss of national ident...
^^
Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
... in the number of tourists. In general,there are many cons of globalization but the ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... pros are more prominent and obvious. so globalization needs to be improved on t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in general, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63888888889 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28991853279 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7202768047 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7894736842 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2631578947 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173168082478 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507279330903 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562062769365 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116665204672 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738368824729 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.54 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.