Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
There is no doubt,nowadays government spend a large amount of money on public services as well as on arts.Both are equally important for us . Before giving any point of view let us discuss about this topic in the following paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason to spend money on public services such as on raods, hospitals,and education.Government should spend money on education if our education system is better people of our country become educated.Secondly, government should also expenditure money on roads because in these days people face number of traffic problems and accidents so that to avoid these problems government should become narrow roads , flyovers and so on.Lastly, government should spend some amount of money on hospitals because if they does not spend money on hospitals our health system may be decline.
on the flip side , government also invest some amount of money on arts such as music and theatre because these arts tell the history of our culture to our young genration which is very important for youngsters.Moreover ,government should spend money on music and theatre brcause it is source of entertainment with the help of music and theatre people can reduce their stress on their mind.
To conclude,government should invest money on public services and arts because both have own inportance in our life .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.31330472103 0.247107183377 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.115879828326 0.155533422707 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.068669527897 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0557939914163 0.0501214627716 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0515021459227 0.0437548338989 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.171673819742 0.122226691241 140% => OK
Participles: 0.00858369098712 0.0403226058552 21% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.17960962311 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0171673819742 0.0326793684256 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.068669527897 0.0861772015684 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0343347639485 0.021408717616 160% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00429184549356 0.011925033212 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1349.0 1933.35771543 70% => OK
No of words: 220.0 316.048096192 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13181818182 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20517956788 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368181818182 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222727272727 0.28420135186 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159090909091 0.203846283523 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122727272727 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17960962311 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.037074148 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.56093040696 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.491506142 60.7387585426 78% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.7743622355 212% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 196.148311234 49.517814964 396% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 269.8 127.492653851 212% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 20.7743622355 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.6 0.814263465372 319% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 3.99599198397 450% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 66.2727272727 49.1944974215 135% => OK
Elegance: 2.21153846154 1.69124875643 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341237812175 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186827161985 0.102741220458 182% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.141458768736 0.0668466124924 212% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.849143211587 0.534860350844 159% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196204108898 0.148594505496 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217971608909 0.134430193775 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578441512193 0.0742795772207 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307864061151 0.324371583561 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0868466915609 0.0638462369009 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25144073579 0.228012699653 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372892760049 0.058150111329 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 10.4468937876 38% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.