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is hard work the key to success, or is talent also important?

Essay topics: is hard work the key to success, or is talent also important?

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Many people want to be successful in their life. However, only a few people achieve one because there are certain reasons behind successful person. In this case, some people believe that talent plays key role while others have perception that hard work is the pillar of success.

If you catch something that you never get before, you should do something that you never do before. Also, you need to practice hard regularly. For instance, if you want to be a rich person, you have to work many hours a day. Additionally, it is obviously true that having good motivation beside hard work flourish natural capacity. Also, the hard work enable us to concentration in our work which is more helpful in our life.

On the contrary, it is common belief that talent is one of the crucial elements for being successful. Everybody has talent since they were born. As a result, many people try to be a success person, but they never get everything what they want. It is because they do not have any natural ability in themselves. On the other hand, in my point of view, talent is God-given, which merely few people have it. For example, some genius people who calculate all mathematical problems in their mind and others those who have photographic memory without more hard-working. Hence, talent is a golden key to success.

Undoubtedly, although talent and hard work have great influence in our success, they are not the only one. Some might believe that wealth, happiness and psychological relaxation cause success. Moreover, education is beneficial factor for this one because it improves our opportunity of jobs. Also, in my view, discipline is vital aspect which boldly help hard work as well.

In conclusion, I believe that you cannot do something consistently well if you do not practice and you are not talented. Although success could be due to hard work and talent, many other factors may be existed, so you cannot always determine an exact way for success.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89221556886 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61610866093 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517964071856 0.561755894193 92% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3877079223 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8095238095 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337878163426 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116457083074 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105708530077 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206235382783 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486480336994 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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