The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
Over the past few decades, the development of Internet has never failed to draw public attention in many countries around the world. Some people believe that this phenomenon causes more benefits than drawbacks, I completely agree with this point of view.
There are numerous drawbacks that the development of the Internet has caused. Firstly, Internet users spending almost their time on interacting with each other through virtual online accounts, which could results in losing their abilities to communicate with other persons in reality. In addition, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable and helpful. For example, some websites containing full of sexual and violent contents, which are not appropriate for children, are easily approached via using Internet in any place whenever they want.
On the other hand, there are also several benefits that the revolution of Internet has brought. Globally spreading of network does have a potential to foster greater way to communicate among people in many countries around the world, which means that people could contact with their relatives regardless of geographic adversity by using Internet. Besides, joining to global network could provide users such opportunities to meet people with multicultural backgrounds, and their horizon thus is broadened by understanding other cultures. For example, Internet based applications, such as Facebook and Yahoo, support these user delivery messages to others by only a few clicks, no matter where the location is.
In conclusion, apart from aforementioned features above, I reaffirm that the skyrocketing change of Internet has brought more benefits than drawbacks
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...gh virtual online accounts, which could results in losing their abilities to communicat...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...er persons in reality. In addition, not all of the information available on the Internet i...
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Line 5, column 616, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this user' or 'these users'?
Suggestion: this user; these users
...ns, such as Facebook and Yahoo, support these user delivery messages to others by only a f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, so, thus, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61328125 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.827820145 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9024832604 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130013995189 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523106445452 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396143044326 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878057535363 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059550907973 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.