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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, It is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Essay topics: It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, It is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

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There are some belief that, the person is expert in his/her genre because they were born with that talent. However, it might be the case that, the person can get interest in some field after some age. Also, the person developing interest in a field later can be taught to excel. Therefore, before attending my view, both opinions should be examined.

First, the former view states that, the person who persue the field of his/her interest is because they are born with such talent. For instance, the bollywood fame Mrs.Madhuri Dixit had interest in dancing since her childhood because her mother was also a famous dancer. Moreover, the person who is a born dancer or sports person or a musician has inherited talent from their parents.

Furthermore, the latter part states that, the person who is not talented from his/her childhood, they can be taught to become a good sports person. It is not necessary that, the person is born with the golden spoon. It is possible that, along with the growing age a person gets interested in a particular field and wish to persue. For instance, bollywood fame Mr.Ranveer Singh had no interest in acting neither he was born with such talent. But, gradually he developed his interest and made rigorous efforts to be successful.

In a nutshell, from all the aforementioned reason, I would support the latter opinion than the former. It is indeed that, a person can be what he/she wants to be. However, there are some legends who has born talent in a particular field.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Madhuri
...t. For instance, the bollywood fame Mrs.Madhuri Dixit had interest in dancing since her...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ranveer
...persue. For instance, bollywood fame Mr.Ranveer Singh had no interest in acting neither...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83397683398 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45996552015 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517374517375 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1775136753 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.4666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24048616523 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955678564567 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574520807612 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164610785622 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345513510875 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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