It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects What are causes And what will be effected on society

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are causes? And what will be effected on society?

In many nations, there is not enough student learning science subject in universities and colleagues. This problem is caused by some factors, and it has some effect on society.

There are some reasons why many students in universities or colleagues choose other subjected such as physical education or music instead of learning science subjects. Firstly, since these subjects are usually difficult than others, students might have to spend more time to learn this. As a result, they tend to chose other subjects which allow them to have more free time. Secondly, as science subjects are not taught in the right way in some countries, it does not attract students to participate. For example, almost science subjects at university are theory and without the exciting experiments, they are hard to find their passion in science.

However, this tendency might bring about some negative effects on society. Firstly, since fewer students choose science subjects, there is an increase in the number of students choose other soft subjects, which creates an unbalance between science students and social students. As a result, many social students will be unemployed because the number of them is too huge compared with the need of society. Secondly, as science is the main factor in science and technology, lacking scientist decelerate the development of society

In conclusion, there are some reasons why fewer students choose science subjects and this tendency might create some negative effects on society.

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Average: 8.6 (35 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3781512605 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6043100083 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533613445378 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2598831197 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.363636364 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253473277543 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102385774041 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711363270844 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174236226279 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645716532971 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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