Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life. How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money?
Presently, finance regulation is one of the major parts of matures' lives.Therefore, every adult person may need to know how to control his or her capital. There are, probably, two most popular methods of studying money management, namely, attending specialized courses and installing particular software.
First way of learning how to run finances is to enroll on specialized courses. While attending such classes, people obtain detailed information about the subject due to the fact that lessons are normally conducted by professionals. In addition, learners can ask any question related to managing property during lessons and receive justified answers immediately. On the other hand, it can be expensive to pay for the course, especially for those who attend the classes in order to save money. Consequently, if people go to such courses they may conversely overspend their finances.
Another approach to the problem of learning how to control capitals is installing special software. Certain applications can calculate people's income, expenses on necessary products, taxes and entertainment. The most considerable benefit of this method is that learning by applications is faster because people do not have to compute figures ; the application accomplishes such procedures instead of humans. Furthermore, studying using software is much cheaper than , for instance, taking special courses because everything they have to pay for is the downloading of the application. However, this way can be unreliable owing to the fact that errors may occur in any software sometimes. Additionally, a phone with the software can be stolen , which might lead to the disclosure of the data.
To sum up, there are a number of practicable mechanisms of learning how to operate finances, even though each of them has both merits and demerits. Thus, there is probably no such way of learning money management that could be ideal for all people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04666357406 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63122923588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7221325278 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.933333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210776485445 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649938872624 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502809148629 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131191731958 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473350388969 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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