A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
The main source of income depends on tourism. Sadly, many problems can also come from tourism if it is not arrangement on the right way. I will discuss this topic on following paragraphs.
Despite to tourism increase from these days, it brings several problems. For example, Pi Pi Island, Thailand, every year there are numerous of visitors visited Thailand and the number is growth to 32.59 million foreign guests visiting in 2016. This is the reason that why there are many hotels and resorts built to be providing and having accommodation enough for customers. Moreover, some visitor leaves plastic or trash on the beach while visiting, besides can ruin the coral by standing on it. As a result, this kind of tourism gives disadvantage than benefits of the environment.
On the other hand, a visitor brings in money additionally it may be the most vital proportion income of the nation. In this case, it provides a job of locals people as hotels, souvenir shops, bars, restaurants, and transports there all needs staffing to work. Likewise, tourism can promote specific places on their network or internet, then it gives a chance to show itself off and raise its profile in the world. In the same way, it is providing economic in places and the nation, plus this gives advantage and benefits at the same time.
To sum up. It seems to me that visitor can bring cash and troubles at the same time, although regional are not organizing or organizing in a good way. Thus, this weighs the pros and cons and the possible benefits
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Pi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for example, kind of, as a result, to sum up, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82575757576 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53935958608 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3031977777 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192460810898 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656081215776 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850707966653 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119708226379 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870327940165 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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