Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
There are many cases where the ex-convicts continue to commit crimes again after they have been released from prison. There are some main reasons behind this situation, by looking into them, we can find out a few measures which can be taken to solve this problem.
Firstly, in prison, many man with a criminal record is put together in the same building for a very long time, this system creates a favorable environment for degenerate minds to exchange ideas and information, inevitably causes them to behave even worse. Secondly, a past prisoner is the last type of people any companies would consider to hire. Thus, they, after serving in prison, often remain jobless for a long time and with the enforcement or enticement of their fellow offenders, would eventually relapse into criminal behaviors.
To help ex-prisoners reform and rejoin the community, prisons should focus on rehabilitation and community services as a means to change the criminals, not only by imprisonment itself. As they help the community, their heart will open up and they will think more about making society a better place. There should be campaigns to raise awareness about the fact that if we have kind thoughts and treat the ex-convicts right, they will not become re-offenders. Companies and organizations should allow ex-offenders to have jobs and prisons should have vocational programs to train the inmates to have practical skills such as graphic design, computer programing or accounting.
In conclusion, the current prison system should focus more on rehabilitation, raising community acceptance and educational programs for prisoners instead of punishing them. As we all open our hearts and accept ex-prisoners back into our society, we give them a chance to avoid recidivism and start to build a new happy healthy life around family and friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun man seems to be countable; consider using: 'many men'.
Suggestion: many men
...ve this problem. Firstly, in prison, many man with a criminal record is put together ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24324324324 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81443860223 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641891891892 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7007875585 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.090909091 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139764826838 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536163670174 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760667699733 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103534691337 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119085889237 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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