: Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and include your opinion, supported by examples.
In this day and age, an increasing number of countries over the world are hosting an international sporting event. Some people claim that this event brings more problems than advantage. However, it is argued that international sporting event promotes their reputation and receive the huge benefit. This essay will discuss the aforementioned views before coming to a conclusion.
Many countries have possibility to deal with a lot of alarming problems. Firstly, many countries have suffered from debt and lack of security after holding a major event. According to some articles, there are many countries having difficulty with finance when the event is over. Futhermore, many world-wide event like Olympic or Seagame are held in some giant stadiums. As the result, the huge crowd of people go into these places to back up their favorite or their national teams. This can lead to terrorism which have got on the Government’ nerves to face with. Money is spent more on security and safeguards. Moreover, Disease can easily be spreaded through these big events. People catch all kinds of infections, especially airbone infection. Stadiums are left fallow when the games are done. All of these reasons can lead to economic waste which makes countries become struggled to face with the consequence.
In contrast, the number of countries wanting to host big event is rapidly increasing. Although the countries themselves know the consequence of hosting an international event, they want to take advantage of this event because opportunities are hard to seize. A major event is likely to attract more tourists to come to the hosting countries. This also promotes the reputation of these countries. Not only does it promote in the time when events are held but it also brings huge benefit and tourism after all. Hosting an international event is a chance to entertain all citizens and foreigners. At the end of the event, some countries worth the extraordinary cost, even though they have spent a lot on preparation before. The result of some games can be predicted so many orgnizations receive huge profit.
To conclude, hosting a world-wide event is the challenge for all countries to face with. The major event brings both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, many countries should decide carefully by asking both their citizens and competent authorities in order to take less risk. These countries should take advantage of the event because it can be worth huge profits after many years.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, after all, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19259259259 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82633121699 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508641975309 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2147846718 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.8888888889 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.37037037037 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3732452022 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102923201724 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817553121016 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256551415458 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990017483841 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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