Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is clear that highways are great help for people to travel swiftly and reach a destination in time. Nevertheless, they pose serious problems; this essay will discuss the two prime issues of thoroughfares and put forward some ideal solutions.
To begin with, one of the biggest threats of freeways is that they can be terribly dangerous. What I mean by this is that in many countries, speed limit on main roads is often very high, which can be the obvious sources to be involved in fatal accidents. Over and above that most people especially youngsters, they love to drink and drive in this type of wide throughways regardless of appalling weather. And the strong possibilities of it is likely the fatal death which we have frequently read in daily newspapers and watched in the televisions. Therefore, these types of troubles can be solved readily if government reduced the speed thresholds, adopted tough laws and handed down stiff punishments to those people who will violate the rules and regulations.
Another alarming matter of expressways can be considerable damage to a pristine environment. To put it in another way, this type of superways are usually constructed with dramatic clearance of alien trees, forests and so on, which are generally regarded as the lungs of the earth. Not only these infrastructures are damaging to fragile ecosystems but also they are causing air and noise pollutions secondary to the use of old quality vehicles and subsequently a surge in the levels of emissions and annoying noises. So, these problems can be tackled if the government selected suitable places as building undergrounds and tunnels rather than chopping down dense jungles. And all the drivers should be encouraged to drive environmental friendly cars which could help in dwindling the amount of harmful gases namely carbon dioxide and methane. Putting up sound proof fences and motivating to use new vehicles can be a perfect solution to get rid of unnecessary uproars.
To conclude, much as roadways are blessings for all of us, there are pressing problems as pollutions and potential tragic deaths. However, with diligent preparations and plannings, the government could address the above mentioned major worrying concerns.
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highways are great help for people
highways are great helps for people
highways are a/the great help for people
Not only these infrastructures are damaging to fragile ecosystems but also they are causing air and noise pollutions secondary to the use of old quality vehicles
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. check books out how to use 'Not only...but also'
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 362 350
No. of Characters: 1837 1500
No. of Different Words: 228 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.362 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.075 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.818 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.133 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.82 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.516 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss the two prime issues of thoroughfares and put forward some ideal solutions. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, i mean, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19337016575 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89346147169 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627071823204 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.68285384 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0893513756183 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292100538954 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287758843219 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568806604579 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265866787189 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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