Now big cities have many problems. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage city residents to move to small cities and towns?
With the modernization and urbanization process, nowadays, metropolises face with a variety of serious issues. To reduce the pressure of big cities, authorities should encourage inhabitants to live in suburban areas. This essay will discuss this problem.
To begin with, there are a lot of problems which big cities encounter. First and foremost, that people have intention to reside in metropolises results in over population. This induces the lack of land area for people to inhabit. In details, city-dwellers must live cramped up and as a result, the standard of living will decrease dramatically. Secondly, the dense of population in big cities is a reason of traffic jam, in particularly on rush hour. For example, that the number of vehicles raised significantly while the quality of facilities is worse makes streets congested with traffic. In addition, one more ground which large cities must deal with is pollution such as the contamination of air, watter and land. For instance, many traffic release fumes into the air make it polluted and tons of garbage, litter that is released from the daily life haven't been treated make the air and the water become polluted day by day. As a result, it affects negatively on health people.
For solving these problems, I am in favor of that the government takes some measures to encourage city inhabitants to live in small cities and towns. The major cause is that it makes society easier to be controlled. The fact shows that with the less population, the authority will spend on demand about housing, career and more serious problems for government. However, it is not the best way to tackle this issue. The government should impose some regulations on limiting the days of cars on road, enact some environment laws and improve the standard of infrastructures.
In conclusion, there are a various grounds in big cities such as housing shortage, traffic jam, pollution and so on. I strongly believe that government should give some methods to lessen this issue, end encouraging city-settlers to move to the small areas in one of the effective way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07204610951 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85908883346 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5734870317 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5874285103 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6315789474 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276384347045 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774694907148 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893026694874 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169031410275 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644251895398 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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