Due to technological revolution, there has been significant impact in human lives. People are able to do official work from the comfort of
their home. However, there are benefits and drawbacks of working from home. I will discuss both sides and draw a conclusion.
Let's begin by looking at the advantages first. One of the positives is that, it can create better work life balance. What I mean by this is
that he can concentrate in household activities as well as in his office work. For instance, he can ease of his wife's work by playing with
children, by watering the garden and so on. Not only it makes worker ecstatic but also extremely motivating towards his work. As a result,
there are perfect possibilities that he could achieve his goal conveniently.
Another advantage is that he can save money. In other words, he can utilise the money that he used to spend during traveling to his
office. Over and above that, he doesn't have to face difficulties like traveling in a crowded train overwhelmed with bad smells of
passengers. Which is why he can spend either the money with his family or friends in a restaurant.
Turning to the other side of the argument, one of the major drawbacks is disturbances and ineffective results.That is to say that, he can
be easily tempted by television, by neighbours, and so on. As a consequence, he may not accomplish his work effectively. Whats more,
he will lack teamwork activity. Moreover, there will be no one to correct his mistakes so that there fair chances that he will have negative
impression upon his boss.
In a nutshell, although, some people prefer to work from home, there are obvious benefits and drawbacks of it. I personally believe that
benefit in terms of person's happiness will outweigh any downside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, i mean, as a result, as well as, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02950819672 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81412722045 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2860228504 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12793183128 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511124427602 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626339022973 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.049057722833 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643284062446 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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