The world nowadys has become wide open with lot of oppotunities for everbody especially for young adults. One of many aspects is the chance to study abroad which allow student to live and learn new things in a foreign country to expand their knowlegde as well as their skills. I am the opinion that study abroad will bring many benefits to individual students but also brought obstacles and disadvantages. I will explain the claim in the following essay.
On the one hand, the clear advantages would be be opportunity to broaden and deepen student knowlegde in specific field of interest. By study in a foreign developed country, one could learn and absord the most up-to-day knowlegde as well as practial applicable technique. The story of myself study neuroscience in Korea university could be a good example for this. As the post graduate student, I chose Korea to be my next destination to learn about neuroscience, especially about Alzheimer's disease. As one of the top ten developed country, Korea university also equipted with state-of-the-art instruments and machines enable researcher to conduct their experiment. I have learn a lot during the time working as independent researcher in the university.
On the other hand, individual student who study abroad have also face with difficluties and disavantages during the course of their study. Living alone without the support from family together with the stress from work could defeat the strongest, toughest person. If not being dealt properly, one could be thinking about quiting school.
Overall, study in a foreign country open the way for student to broaden their knowlegde and learn new skills but in return, they also have to face with difficulties and obstacles that needed to overcome.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...he one hand, the clear advantages would be be opportunity to broaden and deepen stude...
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Line 3, column 675, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...her to conduct their experiment. I have learn a lot during the time working as indepe...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...dual student who study abroad have also face with difficluties and disavantages duri...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...face with difficluties and disavantages during the course of their study. Living alone without the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18596491228 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83777881659 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5193700892 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272646107975 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951493784916 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106036385882 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180604877129 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082742599864 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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