Nowadays, people always throw the old thing away when they buy new things, and we are living in a throwaway society. What factors cause this phenomenon? What problem does leads to?
It is true that people have a tendency to discard their old or damaged possessions these days when they own something new. There are various reasons why we behave in this way, and it seems to me that the effects are largely negative.
Many people tend to throw the old things away because of several reasons following. The bottom line is that the rapid development of technological industry. Everyday a wide range of modern gadgets is launched. We would find it easy to renew our household appliances and replace the old things by the most up to date ones. In addition, due to busy lifestyle in modern world, many individuals do not have sufficient time to repair objects. Moreover, these days while the higher spirit of competition of among manufactures worldwide, people earn more money compared to past. Therefore, customers who follow fashion can benefit from this competitiveness and buy a good product at a lower price, and they do not care about throwing old things away and buy the new ones.
There are also some potential problems at the cost of human activities. Firstly, this trend can cause serious environmental degradation. It is truly that the amount of garbage discharged into the environment is going up, which results in the insufficient room left; therefore, individuals have to burn it to make room for upcoming waste. By doing this, there can be a rise in the number of carbon footprint emitted into the nature, which can definitely exacerbate the current climate change. In addition, this issue can place a burden on the government as well as citizens. The government has to spend money on building up landfill sites, where can be used to constructed public park the standard of living of the residents instead. Therefore, it can downsize government budget allocated for public services, such as railway network or public facilities, resulting in a decrease in the residents’ standard of living.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the government and each individual should takes steps to raise community awareness, so that they can repair their old-fashion things instead of wastefully throw it away.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... development of technological industry. Everyday a wide range of modern gadgets is launc...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...e government and each individual should takes steps to raise community awareness, so ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04519774011 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84931783915 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.259780263 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.058823529 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197074186221 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574361341478 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614330307849 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123258790092 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518455551577 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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