Nowadays university education is very expensive. Some people say that universities should reduce their fees, especially for the less fortunate students or those coming from rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
There has been a significant increase in the university fees in the recent years, making it difficult for people of limited means to consider getting educated. This essay shall explain the fee rise in the universities along with offering solutions in the advantage of poorer students.
As the requirements of the world have become dynamic, so has the education industry in terms of curriculum and facilities. Renowned universities now provide far more diverse courses with many advanced facilities to aid students. This encourages student migration; therefore the universities have to add the tuition fees and accommodation charges in the fee structure. Naturally, the university fees will rise. With more and more students taking admissions every year, this hike in fees seems unlikely to go down.
However, this is not a very beneficial situation for the less privileged students. Most students who opt for university studies do so in hopes of getting good jobs, so as to be able to recover their study expenses. But high fees make it incredibly expensive and burdensome for these students to pursue higher education from the start. One solution can be of getting student loans, but in many cases it is observed that students’ parents simply don’t have the collateral to get loans.
Some alternatives in favour of reducing university fees for students can be to raise income from third party sources; this can be comparatively easy for top universities. Getting government funding is another option. Also, instead of a blanket reduction in fees, if possible, a nominal hike can be made in the general fee structure, excluding the poor students, for their better targeted support.
To conclude, I’d say the cost of a degree is an important determinant of the decision to apply to university. In order to grow their talent pools and attract the best talent, rich or poor, universities should provide a consideration for students that cannot take admissions due to financial constraints, but could’ve otherwise performed remarkably
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...es do so in hopes of getting good jobs, so as to be able to recover their study expenses...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, third, as to, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3282208589 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01509401186 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604294478528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3612302754 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254939569657 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813393831309 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429289816681 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137958558985 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216400218134 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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