People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
The world has once again experienced the next wave of the crisis, which has started worldwide in 2008, in 2016 resulting in mass unemployment in developing countries. Interestingly, the statistics, provided by "Financial Times", indicates that there is a proportional link between the unemployment rate and university and college enrollment one. Thus, it comes that people mostly attend educational institutes for prospect career opportunities and immigration to such developed countries as Canada and the USA.
Initially in 2016, the global oil crisis hit the countries, which have oil production as an economic niche. As a result of the crisis, many people had to be dismissed since the economies of the countries have stagnated. On the other hand, another sector (education) of the countries has shown significant growth in the number of students enrolled to educational institutes. This figure indicates that many unemployed residents who lost jobs due to the crisis have an intention to obtain new qualifications in order to either establish own private business or be appointed to a new position. My aunt, for instance, used to work as a designer in Kazakhstan, left the job due to low income; nevertheless, she accomplished real estate agent's course due to the fact that price for real estate has substantially decreased in the country resulting in high liquidity of the market, which, in turn, allows the agents to earn well.
On top of this, similarly, the statistics shows that enrolment ratio in Canadian and US universities also has noticeably improved during the crisis owing to increased number of immigrants from the developing countries. In order to get a well-paid job in the developed countries candidates at least have to graduate from a bachelor degree. The immigration authorities evaluate immigrants by certain points, including an educational level obtained from the intended country to immigrate. For example, the more points, the more a candidate is considered to be suitable to issue the citizenship.
Over the last few years, people attend universities or colleges for either new job opportunities or immigration besides to career preparation. Thus, it is empirical that educational institutions accept as many students as their capacity allows in order to overcome the crisis.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llows in order to overcome the crisis.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'similarly', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'at least', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272727272727 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.14742014742 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0982800982801 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.034398034398 0.0501214627716 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00982800982801 0.0437548338989 22% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.130221130221 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.044226044226 0.0403226058552 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.18984588259 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.046683046683 0.0326793684256 143% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113022113022 0.0861772015684 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.021408717616 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00982800982801 0.011925033212 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2324.0 1933.35771543 120% => OK
No of words: 362.0 316.048096192 115% => OK
Chars per words: 6.41988950276 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.411602209945 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317679558011 0.28420135186 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.270718232044 0.203846283523 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.21546961326 0.137316102897 157% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18984588259 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.037074148 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558011049724 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 62.400448396 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.8571428571 20.7743622355 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9561762658 49.517814964 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.0 127.492653851 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.7743622355 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 0.814263465372 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 57.6250986582 49.1944974215 117% => OK
Elegance: 2.33333333333 1.69124875643 138% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0940692167626 0.332605444948 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108465766218 0.102741220458 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0534666515372 0.0668466124924 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.599400957984 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0672331861608 0.148594505496 45% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562400528326 0.134430193775 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104322796118 0.0742795772207 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.429544491639 0.324371583561 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.126383781282 0.0638462369009 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102567205395 0.228012699653 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998005759861 0.058150111329 172% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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