Societies that don’t respect and honor their women can never make progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree on this statement.
Behind every successful man there is a woman. In fact this statement can be generalized for a state, country or a nation also that a country can never make progress if it didn’t respect their women counterparts.
The prologue of this statement can be attributed to simple questions: how will you distinguish between a civilized and uncivilized person or in fact a developed or an underdeveloped nation? Can one answer this question this by saying or referring to his economic status or his rank. Well, unfortunately it is no. The answer reclines in the reverence of their better halves. The society which commits atrocities on their weaker members is not only uncivilized but also underdeveloped as referred to developed and civilized.
The brutalities done on women by men are not their sign of strength by they are construed as the sign of their weakness which they are camouflaging. Is the valor of men lies in committing crimes on the weak hapless women? The question is still debatable.
So why cant the societies who don’t respect the women progress, because the intelligence and wisdom of women is unique in every respect. By not acknowledging the efforts of women and depriving them of their rights means improper motherhood for future generations which hence weakens the society. Margaret Thatcher, Mother Teresa, Florence Nightingale, Indira Gandhi, etc. these names don’t need any words to prove themselves, they were the torch bearers and had enlightened the lives of many. They represent the sublime face of self-service and sacrifice.
To conclude, I would like to say that women are the best gift ever gifted to man by the God. Dishonoring and demonizing the women folks will not only invite the wrath of God, but also disfigure him too. It is the women who give birth to man, so how can he think of disrespecting the same and progress simultaneously.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...referred to developed and civilized. The brutalities done on women by men are no...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... question is still debatable. So why cant the societies who don't respect th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245070422535 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.160563380282 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0507042253521 0.0946595960268 54% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0478873239437 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0591549295775 0.0437548338989 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.101408450704 0.122226691241 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0422535211268 0.0403226058552 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98451809222 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0225352112676 0.0326793684256 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10985915493 0.0861772015684 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225352112676 0.021408717616 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0225352112676 0.011925033212 189% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1889.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03514376997 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329073482428 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258785942492 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201277955272 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153354632588 0.137316102897 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98451809222 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 63.1152150871 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3888888889 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3872931866 49.517814964 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.944444444 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.814263465372 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 43.2674831381 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.45263157895 1.69124875643 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246312584061 0.332605444948 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0985527708563 0.102741220458 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.084218723295 0.0668466124924 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.528274158813 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.189138858841 0.148594505496 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865965791911 0.134430193775 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813712144906 0.0742795772207 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.314339312664 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0974942307949 0.0638462369009 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166074969691 0.228012699653 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708434848847 0.058150111329 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.