The society is based on rules and laws. The society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they want.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Laws refer to the rules imposed on human beings. Some people hold that laws play an important role in regulating our behavior and make this world better. From my point of view, I agree that a country can maintain the order by laws and rules.
First of all, if people obey rules, our country not only can be in order, but also embrace more opportunities for economic development. Take selling fake products as a case, if those who sell fake goods are not punished, consumers would be afraid of buying stuff, which means the buying power of a country probably get influenced. Another example shows that laws are indispensable can be about traffic conditions. As long as all the drivers and pedestrians follow the rules, then the occurrence rate of traffic accidents and congestion of traffic can decrease more than before.
We all wish live in a peaceful and closely-knit society. However, human beings are creatures born with passion. We may do something harmful to others when we are angry or because of self-interest. For instance, some businessmen are motivated by profit to do bribery, or even kill their rivals. For this kind of situation, laws definitely are of significance to make this world safer.
From what we discussed above, it's reasonable to conclude that laws and rules are essential to operate the world well. Even though, laws does not allow people act at will, the main purpose of it is to create a society where people live in harmony.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, well, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.852 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63772326069 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2343263944 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6428571429 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.074719277617 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245427952271 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284925024856 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0473171367098 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304095244776 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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