In some countries it has been observed that many parents choose to study their children at home, others think that it is important for children to go to school? Advantages or Disadvantages

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In some countries it has been observed that many parents choose to study their children at home, others think that it is important for children to go to school? Advantages or Disadvantages

Most of the states could be found that the parenting class is passed at home, while some people think that, schools are one of an essential factor for children's achievement. when each view has its merits, there is no reason why the two should be mutually exclusive.
High school degree plays a crucial role in improving the quality of child's mind. For example, At present time, In some counties such as Melbourne, London, Dubai schools are being involved sides of huge knowledge, more comfortable class, a great of teachers potential are influenced child's field. In addition, If the authorities should planning to launch a full-scale investigation into the educational system has been the main causes of improvement of school rate. Consequently, the high level of knowledge quality gives local people or parents more choices successfully what their want. After that, elevated school is one of the major part of children's life.
Although teaching children at home is a good idea, this tendency impacts on children thoughts about the world. First of all, Compared to teaching of school atmospheres, position of training at home does not meet the requirement of education standards. Second of all, Children growing up without friends and they tend to be much more loss of the interest in life. As a result, Child has been felt the stress and to become self-contained. Therefore, Parents should make specific analyze about children's life.
To conclude, Children should be gone to the school to achieve a goal for the perspective.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.116 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77480377685 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8298215196 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3846153846 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287379166868 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962345368853 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664299486515 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176080014285 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225533000223 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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