Some people argue Laws changes human behavior whereas some disagree. Do you agree with it?
Law is the only way to exercise control over the public to maintain peace. People usually behave in a way that is in accordance with the law. It is true that human behaviour is governed by legislations. Strict lasso makes better countries & people respond to a situation in an orderly manner.
To begin with, countries with the strict laws have minimal crime rate. For example, in Singapore smuggling drugs is a criminal offence and one has to face death penalty and therefore such activities hardly take place there. This exemplifies that laws can alter people’s behaviour. Thus, there is an obvious link between laws and human behaviour.
Furthermore, in The UAE, kissing in public is a punishable offence. Every citizen of this country is aware of the law and its hard to find anyone breaking the law and it is the culture of the country. This example clearly shows that the absence of law may create an unfavourable environment for the smooth functioning of the society. Therefore, legislations definitely affect our behaviour.
To summarise, the above analysis establishes that there is a strong positive correlation between law and human behaviour. It has been proven that many countries use lass as a major tool for reforms. It is expected that lawmakers will continue to use it for the betterment of the society in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an orderly manner" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: The word 'anyone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'break'.
Suggestion: break
... of the law and its hard to find anyone breaking the law and it is the culture of the co...
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Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...se it for the betterment of the society in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0269058296 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82088814331 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596412556054 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3970758828 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7333333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152771741678 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548859390713 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510242389645 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957354612464 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443276739749 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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