Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
People hold different views of whether homework should be given to children. While there are some strong arguments against this situation, I still believe that homework plays an important role in education.
Looking at the down sides, several reasons are made to explain why homework has laid an unnecessary burden in student's life. Firstly, doing homework is time-consuming. Without it, children will have more free time to attend various outdoor activities. As a result, students not only improve their health but also gain practical experiences. Secondly, no homework means no stress. The pressure of completing homework on time has led to lots of children in Asian countries staying up late. Finally, many parents would agree that school day is already long enough and children are too tired to do further study.
Despite the above disadvantages, I still consider homework to be more vital in the schooling of children. The main benefit is that it encourages oneself independence and problem solving in which students can learn to deal with difficult tasks alone. For instance, by doing math exercises at home, students will learn how to manage time and overcome difficulties by using reference books and various information from lessons at school. Therefore, they can widen their knowledge and increase their confidence before coming to class which will develop an independent study habit for future jobs.
In conclusion, homework has its pros and cons but, in my view, I strongly believe that the advantages will eventually outweigh the drawbacks in the long term.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29482071713 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7329225334 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689243027888 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3452363813 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296223311037 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101430139689 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898984912162 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193263906434 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125779430459 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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