Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.
It is true that career after graduating is one of the attention problems to young people in many countries. While many people consider that continuing to study at university or college can be the best way to guarantee the successful job, some argues that it is better to work straight after school.
On the one hand, getting a job straight after high school can be beneficial in some ways. Firstly, a person who chooses to get a job instead of pursuing higher education is likely to progress rapidly in their career. This could bring about many good opportunities to obtain a lot of real experience and necessary skills for the work environment. Secondly, young people who have idea condition to study without tuition. Many companies have a tendency to pay for college tuition and send their staff aboard to be trained for a professional skill if their employees major in something that is beneficial to the company.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why the majority of young generation is likely to choose a way to continue education after high school. First reason is that in fact, with the marketplace being as competitive as it is, the candidate who has the better education is the top of priority for many employers. As the results, people who have qualification will probably get a higher paid job than those who do not. Another reason is that thanks to the basic knowledge which gain from university, people will also learn a lot of valuable information along the way. For instance, the College provides English and math skills which will take you a whole new height when it comes to those things you do everyday life
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In conclusion, both working right after school and attending to continue higher study are advantageous in their own ways
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83828382838 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64678992057 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7779145787 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259449409475 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959018549541 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106208163358 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181612973181 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113908522125 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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