Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers for example working for a charity improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...as different passion. We could not push some one into similar passion. If we force stude...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...All thinking considered, there are just some of the reasons why some people argue this issu...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'thus', 'apart from', 'at least', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282805429864 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.128959276018 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10407239819 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.052036199095 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0294117647059 0.0437548338989 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108597285068 0.122226691241 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0180995475113 0.0403226058552 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.84828241337 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027149321267 0.0326793684256 83% => OK
Particles: 0.00226244343891 0.00163938923432 138% => OK
Determiners: 0.079185520362 0.0861772015684 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027149321267 0.021408717616 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0203619909502 0.011925033212 171% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2509.0 1933.35771543 130% => OK
No of words: 395.0 316.048096192 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35189873418 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.412658227848 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.321518987342 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.248101265823 0.203846283523 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144303797468 0.137316102897 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84828241337 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.037074148 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572151898734 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 66.967578736 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7894736842 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0790946342 49.517814964 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.052631579 127.492653851 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.814263465372 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 52.9413724184 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.94623655914 1.69124875643 115% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263865132024 0.332605444948 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0728807531082 0.102741220458 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0492960037494 0.0668466124924 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.435016008321 0.534860350844 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197513173929 0.148594505496 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092239172152 0.134430193775 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06054042049 0.0742795772207 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.332845342989 0.324371583561 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0682615547226 0.0638462369009 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195679380707 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210568502448 0.058150111329 36% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 10.4468937876 182% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Formal education does not enough today,
Formal education is not enough today,

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 395 350
No. of Characters: 2047 1500
No. of Different Words: 224 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.458 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.182 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.67 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 158 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.789 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.703 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.295 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.456 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

Dear sir, could you give me suggestions how to get 8? Thanks