Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
Some people believe, by owning a car could give them more drawbacks than its goods. In this essay, I would like to describe the positive and negative impacts of having a private vehicle.
There are two main benefits of owning a car. Firstly, by taking private cars as the way to do activities such as going to the school, work, and so on would make people feel more comfortable especially in the developing countries. They do not need to worry about pickpockets or sexual harassments which are usually found in the public transportations. Additionally, there are no troubled seats, dust, or noises. On the contrary, they would reach their destination with the appearance that remains tidy. Secondly, time can be more efficient, because the public transportations are difficult to be accessed in the residences. Commonly, people walk to the avenue or bus stop then wait for them and it can spend 30 minutes. However, they could directly go, earn time and energy that could be used for anything else that useful.
On the other hand, as an owner of the car also gives him/her two major downsides. To begin with, spending more cost in taxing and maintaining, and not every owner could fulfill those requirements. Recently, in order to decrease the usage of cars on the roads, the government tax private cars very heavily. Additionally, it needs a treatment once a quarter minimally so the machines are not broken as easy as pie. The next on is people would get distressed of parking. Because the increased number of vehicles are not comparable to the availability of parking space. In rush hour, they sometimes could not pull up their cars in the right space but in illegal and unsafe place. Consequently, those things could cost people an arm and a leg.
All in all, I personally agree that cars have more the advantages because it makes our traveling become pleasant. But, I think before buying a car, people should take it into consideration whether they are capable or not to provide the budget that will be needed and could eat up their earning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...people would get distressed of parking. Because the increased number of vehicles are no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, i think, such as, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85227272727 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72866915008 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6028900527 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230132398581 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636197548845 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694808908371 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156429812665 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440463375094 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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