Some People Say That Governments Should Pay For Public Health Care And Education, While Others Say That It’S Not The Government ‘S Responsibility. Discuss Both View And Give Your Opinion.
It is true that people hold different views about whether the governments should cover the cost of healthcare and education. While some people believe that healthcare and education should be paid only by governments, I would argue that governments should shoulder the main responsibility and residents are supposed to contribute partly.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why spending on healthcare and education should be top government priorities. Firstly, not only a well-developed healthcare system can improve the well-being of people but also enhance the social productivity. For example, one who has serious disease would not be able to live a happy, productive and meaningful life. Secondly, good education maintains social stability by reducing the crime rate. Those who received tertiary education are capable of finding a decent job with satisfying salary whereas less-educated people find their life tough and hopeless. As a result, they easily commit a crime, drug abuse.
On the other hand, I believe that citizen should also bear part of the expenses on healthcare and education. On reason is that it can improve the individual’s awareness of their role in health and education. For example, If people were required to pay their shares for the cost, they would become more responsible. This may result in eating a more balanced diet and taking more regular exercise. Furthermore, It would be a huge financial burden of the government. The more the government spend money for healthcare and education, the less budgets will spend on other areas that are more in need such as security, environment.
In conclusion, it is essential for the government to allocate funds to healthcare and education. However, the individual should also assume their parts of the responsibility through paying a proportion of the expense rather than entirely relying on the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun budgets is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...money for healthcare and education, the less budgets will spend on other areas that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32775919732 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01595107641 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.256792905 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3125 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2216269421 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722765537573 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626750963866 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144680942388 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558903754826 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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