Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Many people consider living in the large town, whereas other opinions choose the countryside as their place to live. In this essay, I would describe the goods and the drawbacks of having a life in the rural area or city.
There are two advantages of living in the metropolitan area. To begin with, why many people do urbanization is because it is offering us many great jobs and higher income. They could only find activities that related to farm if living in the village, while actually, they have abilities to develop something different. The next one is transportations and infrastructure are accessible easily. When spending life in the rural region, usually people have struggle like the difficulty in finding bus if they want to take a trip or go to a hospital. However, many options of intra-city mobility could be found as easy as pie and the bumpy road is not as much as in the small town.
On the other hand, be settled in the country also have two two main benefits. First, mostly the villagers are more friendly, they know each other even people who live more than ten houses from them. For example, people in my hometown always have a talk every morning or afternoon and say hi if meet without stopping, including strangers. Thus, this makes people never feel alone. but it is different to societies in the urban neighborhood that is cynical to others. Second, people would breathe fresh air which we can not buy and closer to nature. It could happen because there are plenty of huge trees and not much the traffic or the industrial noises. Additionally, kinds of vegetables could be planted by ourselves and we could control the pesticide to make sure they are green and clean.
All in all, it depends on what kind of life that people prefer. Personally, reside in metropolis area is better to earn some improvements. However, people provide little time to taking a trip to the rural region in gaining a quiet life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to like
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Suggestion: two
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Suggestion: But
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, second, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73668639053 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57595821582 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60650887574 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0336248701 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2631578947 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223623043378 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630994141854 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794860317558 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143569328041 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628440555631 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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