Some people think that the increase of cheap air travel has brought many benefits while travel others argue that this develpment has its drawbacks to the world’s encironment and resources. Discuss these two points of view. Whats your opinion?

It is a known fact that air travel has become one of the most important transportation for people in the nation and among the nation's. Some people opine that cheap air travel is good while others argue that these are bad for environment.
Main aim of this essay is to contemplate both views and draw a rationalistic conclusion.

First of all, some people consider that cheap air travel is good and they believe that it enables ordinary people to travel. Because both economy and equality are poor in some country.
People are suffering from poverty. For their better future and emergency purposes they need to travel by air. In this situations cheap air travel is better for them. To substanciate it,cheap air travel encourage people to travel in most effective way. For example; people travel by airplane to other country for work as a house made.

On the other hand,others consider that it s bad for environment. Since aeroplane which travel by less fair using less quality fuel releases byproducts that pollute environment and destruct ozone layer of the earth. To clarify, byproducts like carbon dioxide and nitrite components causes ill effect on different spheres. For example; break in the ozone is more in the new era compares to previous and green house effects.

However, there are both views and I tend to opine that cheap air travel is bad for environment. Generations come and go but earth remains same. So should protect our special earth which God gave us. People can find other alternative to improve better economy.

I conclude that cheap air is bad for environment and protect our earth regardless of everything.

Votes
Average: 6.9 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: , cheap
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Suggestion: , others
...k as a house made. On the other hand,others consider that it s bad for environment....
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Line 11, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ect our earth regardless of everything.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277227722772 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.158415841584 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.118811881188 0.0946595960268 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.019801980198 0.0501214627716 40% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.042904290429 0.0437548338989 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138613861386 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.013201320132 0.0403226058552 33% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.60818799708 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03300330033 0.0326793684256 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0660066006601 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00660066006601 0.021408717616 31% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00660066006601 0.011925033212 55% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1644.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 316.048096192 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97818181818 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338181818182 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229090909091 0.28420135186 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174545454545 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0945454545455 0.137316102897 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60818799708 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541818181818 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 54.2397564394 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.4736842105 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0255662068 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5263157895 127.492653851 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4736842105 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38877755511 159% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 37.3827751196 49.1944974215 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.94029850746 1.69124875643 115% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35453023782 0.332605444948 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0895245039909 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0694314115589 0.0668466124924 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.5679080622 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.204969481445 0.148594505496 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126032546569 0.134430193775 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900186800732 0.0742795772207 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.213289986325 0.324371583561 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.093873146932 0.0638462369009 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204561270711 0.228012699653 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917544063129 0.058150111329 158% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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cheap air travel encourage people
cheap air travel encourages people

break in the ozone is more in the new era compares to previous and green house effects.
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?

Sentence: In this situations cheap air travel is better for them.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and situations

So should protect our special earth which God gave us.
So we should protect our special earth which God gave us.

Sentence: To substanciate it,cheap air travel encourage people to travel in most effective way.
Error: substanciate Suggestion: substantiate

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Words: 277 while No. of Different Words: 149 //Don't repeat words, phrases and sentences. like 'bad'

We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

'On the other hand' means 'However'. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 277 350
No. of Characters: 1325 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.08 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.783 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.501 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.389 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.145 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.543 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5