Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
A portion of the society have been thinking that large economical identities especially those of large scales and the industrial ones are being ought to open new market places in foreign areas away from the cities. In my opinion, the pros of doing so is much more than the cons, so in this essay we will discuss why I believe in this idea.
Thinking out of the box and moving outside the usual spaces has become a trend for the most of the companies who have the enough manpower and resources to go out; Moreover according to the management teams, whom has provided many analysis supporting this action, it will allow them to invade other markets and extend the sales to other countries, thus more prosperity and more incomes. For an example, Siemens, the massive builder of electrical systems world widely, has recently opened its new center in the middle east, the center according to them served to acquire the new contracts of the construction of mega power stations in both Egypt and Saudi Arabia.
On the other side, this process should be managed carefully to avoid any unconsidered losses; even though detailed studies offer excessive information about the new areas’ economies and how to find new customers, yet, it may miss some critical information that could lead to significant problems. Such problems might arise because the company was not fully aware of the regional laws governing this area, consequently, local authorities will terminate their presence or scant their activities.
In conclusion, the new idea arising of having new branches by large industrial companies is a brilliant one; Accordingly, it will enable them to extend their budgets; Therefore, this step must be considered with patience and investigations in order to avoid any sever consequences.
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...order to avoid any sever consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08843537415 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6999176428 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659863945578 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6178498301 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 213.714285714 106.682146367 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191000689138 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809464183492 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553231709101 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107964891823 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334913920156 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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