Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foreign country. Others think that they should live as a separate minority group with different lifestyle. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Migration is a process developed in mostly all the age group. it is often argue with many that, they should adopt the culture of the particular country they transferred. Whereas, some of the others views that, the foreigners occlude in minor group and they are lived with their own life style as a solitary groups. However, in my opinion, acceptance of migrated countries culture or live as a single groups are the character and thoughts of oneself.
On the one hand, many believes that, every one should be understand and live like the people from the host countries. On this point of view, there has been good manner is that, they are respecting and pride of the rules and regulations, cultural diversity of hostess. For example, people from different countries are enjoying the celebrations of halo-ween day just for fun and entertainment, which was the celebration of European countries itself. Furthermore, learn to new culture regarding the believes, or religion behalf of the custom and traditions must evolve the behave of the one who is moving to another country. For instance, in Saudi Arabia every females must cover the hair and they should wear some kind of dress related to the religion rules. So that all female migrants should respect the culture and rules and regulations of such countries.
On the other hand, some people insisting to live as an isolated group. Such as socially and physically away from the other groups, and live like their own culture and system. This has to be explained because, the person might refuse their own cultures and customs and which may mitigate the borne values of resident country. So that social isolation may survive this problem and people could often continue this and transfer to the next generation. For instance, as I mentioned before, the Saudi women's must follow the religious custom even if they went outside the kingdom. For that they should keep isolated to their own minor groups to enhance their inevitable culture.
In conclusion, migration is not a detrimental issue if the one who is respect and give space for the hostess culture and custom, moreover, keep up the values of their inborn rhythm of residential country. In my perception, immigrants could adopt the culture and accept as themselves. Along with that, conserve the born countries culture together, instead of live as a separated group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01772151899 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59743627685 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508860759494 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.622352135 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.315789474 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33642361107 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100826965874 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577283993793 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203606763647 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548527622818 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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