Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There are several roles for parents to play. Among those, two are considered as the main role for parents, which are the discipline and nurture. While parents discipline children to teach them about justice, ethics and moral, nurturing provide children a comfortable environment feeling safe. In this essay will discuss the both aspects of role of parents before reaching a reasonable conclusion.
Parents have many responsibilities to guide their children into a right path. Some are involving of educational roles whereas other roles may involve of caring roles. On top of this, the primary roles are the discipline and nurturing roles.
Parents must discipline their children. Otherwise children become uncontrollable. For example, since children are immature, most of their acts are derived from emotions. By doing that criminal, violent and emotional actions are inevitable. Therefore, it is important for parents to control those acts so that children can be a part of society as a society member. From discipline children, they would be able to learn about justice, morality and ethics to play in society.
However, it is also important to provide a secure environment to children by nurturing them. Since children are young and weak to be independent, the parental barrier is required. Under this boundary, children can feel comfortable and learn various skills such as hierarchy of society, the role as a family member as well as build up the personality before they face the reality. As a result of this, children can be a society member.
In my opinion, both aspects are equally important. While boundaries provide feeling of security and a great way to build a confident, discipline can teach children about the consequences of wrong doing, just like society. In reality, there are consequences to be dealt with when people did not follow the rules. A family can be seen as a small society where children can practice various skills before they become a society member.
In conclusion, parents have many roles to be responsible of. While they have to punish children for wrong doing, they have to provide a safe barrier at the same time. Both roles can be seen as the primary roles for parents, because those are required primarily for children in order to build up several skills to be a member of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... their children into a right path. Some are involving of educational roles whereas other role...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...Parents must discipline their children. Otherwise children become uncontrollable. For exa...
^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249417249417 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100233100233 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.02331002331 0.0501214627716 47% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.030303030303 0.0437548338989 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13986013986 0.122226691241 114% => OK
Participles: 0.034965034965 0.0403226058552 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75415686933 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.037296037296 0.0326793684256 114% => OK
Particles: 0.002331002331 0.00163938923432 142% => OK
Determiners: 0.0955710955711 0.0861772015684 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025641025641 0.021408717616 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00699300699301 0.011925033212 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2322.0 1933.35771543 120% => OK
No of words: 382.0 316.048096192 121% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07853403141 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.379581151832 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30890052356 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204188481675 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115183246073 0.137316102897 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75415686933 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460732984293 0.56093040696 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.526109857 60.7387585426 80% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0891783567 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.9166666667 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8737354701 49.517814964 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 46.8067190227 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.04494382022 1.69124875643 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475117483912 0.332605444948 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101172407469 0.102741220458 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0956781187673 0.0668466124924 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494248607497 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138522978021 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162709275118 0.134430193775 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083030658573 0.0742795772207 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330050182391 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0755104328426 0.0638462369009 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288965449001 0.228012699653 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063206055554 0.058150111329 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 10.4468937876 182% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.