Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world.
What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?
Stress has become a matter of concern in recent years as it affects the life of citizens in most countries around the world. Although there are some inevitable driving forces of this trend, measures can be taken to mitigate them.
To begin, the first culprit of stress is the increased demand for better living condition. Nowsaday, metropolitian are obsessed with the hustle and bustle of modern life in order to make ends meet, which is the catalyst of increasing mental pressure. A further element leading to this problem is that citizens are suffered from hectic working schedule, making it impossible for them to have enough leisure times. This can be seen in developing countries such as Korea and Japan where officers have to work nearly 10 hours daily, leading to suicide staffs who are overwhelmed by work pressures.
However, several actions that governments and citizens can be taken to solve the aforementioned problem. First of all, each individual should try to maintain their work and life balance. For instance, we can spend their weekends going to an entertainment center. A second measure worth investing in is the improvement of working standard. As an example, enterprises should provide their workers with a more enjoyable working atmosphere. Finally, each person can pursue an interest such as gardening or raising a pets, which would benefit their mental health as well as relieve their stress .
In conclusion, it can be observed that harsh working condition, financial pressure as well as the lack of spare time are the main factors of stress. Yet, various measures can be taken to tackle with this pressing issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13011152416 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65487103115 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613382899628 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3806407366 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196735360793 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643058150675 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473763615316 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13135882011 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476299198246 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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