successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.some people think this is fully justifiable while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both views and given your own opinion.
These days, sports professionals have been at the center of the debate. While they are gaining huge amount of money, other professionals are trying to find an appropriate career which suits them. Therefore, it causes two different attitudes, whether gaining such huge amount of money is justifiable or not?
Numerous people advocate that sports professionals are desired to earn lots of money as they have to endure severe physical exercises in a very tough situation. In addition, although they may not have an educational degree, they spend their youth to reach the target. For examples, Messi, a very prominent footballer, tried hard to reach this position, and it is not easily accessible and effortless. Now he is one of popular footballer whom a lot of companies try to have him regardless of considering how much money they should afford. On the other hand, these persons bring nations dignity and proud.
The opponents argue that the wage giving to sports men are utterly unfair while other professionals gain a little money, however, they have university degrees. Besides, this money can be invested for brilliant and experienced people in order to make significant changes in science as well as the industry of a nation. This is more understandable while many scientists cannot prove their patent due to monetary status. Thus, investing money in an appropriate way should be considered.
To sum up, sports professionals should be considered like as other professionals. They both are desired to be given appropriate salaries. I personally agree that given a high salary to sports professional while neglect other professionals is a faulty attitude. The balance should be set up to pay desirable salaries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... monetary status. Thus, investing money in an appropriate way should be considered. To sum up, spor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20938628159 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95756676824 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602888086643 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1645544698 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229676729213 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754481565169 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542833336838 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142245225565 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369256396362 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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