With advances in transportation people are travelling more and more, which also influences the traveler positively in many aspects.
People are travelling much more than before mainly due to advances in flight industry. People had spent too much time to travel from one place to another, just because flying seems to be a luxurious thing. But in last decades, increased demand in market, lead to competition among major companies which in turn resulted in decreased flight tickets.
Moreover, in the past, flying could be done only between major cities, which also changed today totally. In western countries, even small cities has some kind of airport. This is also valid for small or developing countries to some extend. People are choosing to live in cities which has an airport, and this puts a pressure to governments to build more airports.
The impact of travelling is almost always positive to a traveler, no matter whether you do it for leisure activities or for business. People tend to be afraid of the things that they don’t know, or understand. But if you travel, you can came up with the different cultures and traditions and get the rationale behind them. In that way, traveling gives you the flexibility and tolerance to the people and culture around the world.
In addition, you can also meet with many people and get friends, not only in your hometown but also somewhere far from your home.
In conclusion, advances in technology lead to affordable flights and increased traveling opportunities, which helped us to understand each other better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...r small or developing countries to some extend. People are choosing to live in cities ...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
... understand. But if you travel, you can came up with the different cultures and trad...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... also somewhere far from your home. In conclusion, advances in technology lead...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11196911197 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69755162742 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2776579269 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293792594569 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10269995956 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878084511236 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148769197614 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913561828644 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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