There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
With the passage of time, the music industry has evolved dramatically, due to the invention of various musical instruments, songs and music became extremely soothing to ears. There are numerous types music available around the world for the people to listen, according to cultures, tradition and languages. Musician and bands are trying to make music according to people need and entertainment. They are trying to figuring out why people listen and what’s the purpose of music and what kind of music people to listen.
The question is why do we need music? In order to understand the music we need go back in the history of music. In ancient history, we have glut of example, when people use to entertain themselves through music. The artist and musicians of that time entertain the Mughal emperors and kings through their instruments like sitar and amazing vocals which release the stress and bring peace to their life. Even, in today’s world people listen to music in order to calm down and get out from a daily stressful office life.
Moreover, the music industry people are focusing more on modern music because the youth likes to hear extremely loud songs. The usage of steel drums and guitar climbed up tremendously by the musician and bands, because they think that it attracts the youth and children. While on the other hand traditional music losing its popularity among the young people, only old and aged people are fond of them. But if we talk in terms of money and economy, the popular musician concerts in different countries also supports the country economy through fans around the world to that concerts.
To sum up, I contend that music is so important for individual in terms of enjoyment and entertainment, further modern type of music could increase the influx of cash in a country and in this way the employment rate also increase through concert business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'glutted'.
Suggestion: glutted
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97169811321 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55587649306 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562893081761 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4262844966 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.928571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464335761599 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187324136436 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115156875049 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278976954867 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616252538896 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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