These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.
Some people belived that an immigration to urban areas of rural population is increasing in the modern world. This essay will take a closer look at some major causes and effective solutions for this issue .
It is undeniable that this phenomenon has many negative influences to the quality of life of citizens living in cities . Firstly , immigrating massively to urban areas lead to overpopulation which is main reasion for lack of occupation or accommodation. Secondly , the increase of urban citizens means that the number of transports rises. Then , this causes traffic congestion and air pollution in cities. For instance , Ha Noi , which has the highest number of immigrants , has the high level in unemployment and pollution . Moreover , its traffic during peak hours is always chaotic with numerous accidents per day.
To solve these problem , the Government should impose a law that can create more well-paid jobs in both rural and urban areas and encourage people to work in their country. Additionally, it is clear that the majority of immigrants move to cities for education , health services or entertainment . Therefore , establishing huge schools , hospitals and malls in countryside may be the most effective solution.
In conclusion , there are some reasons for the increase of immigrants to urban areas , i believe that a number of measures should be done by the authorities to overcome the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98892315233 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620535714286 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0350285712 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245888424117 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825043623373 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651433853301 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156140908599 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604186767654 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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