Think critically about the following statement.A universal language should replace all languages.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a universal language

It is a fact that there are a lot of languages in this world and people were spoken different type of language according to their own culture. A group of people believe that there are several advantages of being universal language like doing business throughout the world easily and education growth. Although, some people believe that disappearing the culture and tradition and poetry and literature is major disadvantages of having global language. Therefore, I believe that having a global language and should be shared by everyone.

Some people argue that the using of only one universal language could be a disappeared the culture and tradition of small and new developed language. It would mean that all the others language would eventually disappear and along with their culture. Every culture has its own value and beliefs which would all be lost if there were only one language in the world. The world has a diversity of culture so, if there were same language in the world people may lost to enjoy with different culture and tradition.

However, one major benefit to having a global language is that it would be easier to doing the business between two countries. In other words, people have a same language in the world so, it might very easier to understand the vision of business, prospective and the intension about business person. People easily communicate with other foreign people which become the strong benefit for the people in business.

Some other people claim that obvious disadvantage to having a global language has arisen the problem on poetry and literature. The writer would be faced the difficulties on writing book or poem on other language rather on their own. They may feel anxiety to grab other language because they unknown about other languages writing style.
On the other hand, there are plus point to having global language was education growth. With all the people speaking the same language there will be increased the communication between the people. Students from any country of the world might get opportunity to learn on reputed university anywhere in the world with same language. For example, the students from Asian countries might get opportunities to studies on Australian university if they have a common global language like English.

In conclusion, there are many advantages outweigh disadvantages of having the global language. Universal language give more benefit for the world due to doing business transactions, easy communicate with foreign people and to enrich the education quality throughout the world. Therefore, there should be one universal language to be shared by everyone.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...ed language. It would mean that all the others language would eventually disappear and...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258134490239 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.14967462039 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106290672451 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0281995661605 0.0501214627716 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0260303687636 0.0437548338989 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132321041215 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0498915401302 0.0403226058552 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6682611255 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281995661605 0.0326793684256 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0997830802603 0.0861772015684 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0303687635575 0.021408717616 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00433839479393 0.011925033212 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2652.0 1933.35771543 137% => OK
No of words: 428.0 316.048096192 135% => OK
Chars per words: 6.19626168224 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20517956788 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397196261682 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282710280374 0.28420135186 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207943925234 0.203846283523 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135514018692 0.137316102897 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6682611255 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.406542056075 0.56093040696 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.7487685757 60.7387585426 72% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.380952381 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.233829377 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.285714286 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.380952381 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.814263465372 53% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 48.6519804183 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 2.15957446809 1.69124875643 128% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38758385957 0.332605444948 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.172803211993 0.102741220458 168% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0926539560703 0.0668466124924 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.614344165162 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0890675514195 0.148594505496 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16927589177 0.134430193775 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065318005865 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.39442438184 0.324371583561 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0726437905295 0.0638462369009 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259733461011 0.228012699653 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585363693085 0.058150111329 101% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 5.90881763527 220% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 10.4468937876 201% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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