Today, The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, Advertising is the most Popular advertising strategy for grows sales,which is popular in market for near future. Sometime product represent in that way consumer attract for product.
Most of companies in market use advertising for introduce a product .Advertising product sales became higher if marketing strategy high. Advertising of products displaying in that manner product gives instant result instead of reality. For an example in soap, advertising shows that it will give instant fairness but reality is different from this ads. it gives fairness in long term instead of short period.
Nowadays, technologies become an acme point so that everyone is using technologies in terms of component suggest fridge, Ac etc. In other example of AC in which shows that it gives extream comfort they do not show that AC will consume high power. As per this advertising Middle class families bought AC but after further times they realised that it is Expensive.it denote that Middles class family does not need AC but Company advertise in that way lower family is also attract from that product.
As per above discussion, we can conclude that advertising has power of attract people instead of it does not need in society. Even Advertising is also changing opinion of buyer for example if consumer would like to purchase product but i will divert your mind to other product but some situation advertising helps us to choise correct product by shows default in other product or compares of product.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the companies') or simply say ''Most companies''.
Suggestion: Most of the companies; Most companies
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Suggestion: Advertising
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.342205323194 0.247107183377 138% => OK
Verbs: 0.133079847909 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0912547528517 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0494296577947 0.0501214627716 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0380228136882 0.0437548338989 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.171102661597 0.122226691241 140% => OK
Participles: 0.0152091254753 0.0403226058552 38% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.66744608906 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0114068441065 0.0326793684256 35% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0456273764259 0.0861772015684 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190114068441 0.021408717616 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00760456273764 0.011925033212 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1506.0 1933.35771543 78% => OK
No of words: 245.0 316.048096192 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14693877551 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.395918367347 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326530612245 0.28420135186 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183673469388 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102040816327 0.137316102897 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66744608906 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.037074148 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 54.1204000376 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2727272727 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7738596392 49.517814964 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.909090909 127.492653851 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.814263465372 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.99599198397 250% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 54.9257884972 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 2.39655172414 1.69124875643 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247546259121 0.332605444948 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.153408905765 0.102741220458 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0739891834304 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.615813251507 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125497363175 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115568318668 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615378200941 0.0742795772207 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307732238232 0.324371583561 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0287926475658 0.0638462369009 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164874031521 0.228012699653 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321762103584 0.058150111329 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.