Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extenet do you agree or disagreed?
Nowadays, publicity contributes to selling products which are not necessary. As soon as advertisement has become prevalence in media as well as social networks, the trade boosts significantly. This is happened not only for the needy product but also for goods which are not necessary for the public. This will be proven in this essay.
Children are the first target of advertisement. They lured by the ornaments of these products. As children are vulnerable, they are easily tempted by the advertisement to convince their parents to purchase toys or other stuff. We can see Barby dolls in our society with ample advertisements and highly sale. As it is clear, although a child may have two or four dolls, attractive advertisement draws her attention to buy more. Thus, the power of publicity can persuade people to buy unnecessary things.
Besides, today, advertisement become prevalent anywhere which expose people to this phenomenon. At media, social network and also at the hypermarket which public are trying to search their needy products. This inevitably exposed to the advertisement makes people buy some goods unconsciously, or sometimes disturb people from their main needs. It is easily seen in markets while many staffs standing in corridors and trying to convince people to test odors or appetizers. Therefore, it is transparent how advertisement can boost the sale.
To sum up, advertisement plays a crucial role in selling products whether they are necessary or not. This is now understandable why companies invest a huge amount of money on advertising for their
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25296442688 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05393204915 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0754529803 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1764705882 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154175648448 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488199577064 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370830483332 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901356437171 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274734921324 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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