Tourism is important to many countries. However its disadvantages should be overlooked. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your opinion.
Tourism has become a vital part in every country's economy. It is a mechanism which brings countries together and helps the country by bringing the foreign investments. In this essay writer considers the positive and negative aspects of tourism and finally gives her point of view.
One of the main advantages of tourism is as mentioned above, it brings foreign exchange in. This helps an economy to grow by getting exposed to international trade. Another benefit would be tourism helps in developing infrastructure of the country and beautification of the country. Apart from these, local employment opportunities and getting exposed to new culture are also considered to be the other advantages of tourism.
However tourism has its own disadvantages as well. Mainly it increases the over dependency of countries or their influence which leads to economical crisis. There will be artificial inflation and local people will always get 2nd grade goods due to tourism. Traditional occupations such as agriculture will be ignored when tourism is prioritised in a country and also there will be ample of free flow of idealogies or thinking patterns which leads to conflicts among the country.
So when considering the above disadvantages, tourism is considered to be a bane to a country. Simultaneously, its advantages always overtake the disadvantages. As tourism helps to bring the cashflow in and it helps the economy to grow it has to be considered as a boon to a country. There are lot of ways to overcome the disadvantages or convert them in to a favourable impact. Countries can identify what are the disadvantages of the tourism on its own ans should work on it to make them as the opportunities to grow. Therefore writer comes to a conclusion that the advantages of tourism are wa y more than the disadvantages and tourism has to be encouraged in a long term perspective.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: economic
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'apart from', 'as to', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231927710843 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.186746987952 0.155533422707 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0722891566265 0.0946595960268 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0481927710843 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.039156626506 0.0437548338989 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105421686747 0.122226691241 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0481927710843 0.0403226058552 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.16067193583 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0572289156627 0.0326793684256 175% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105421686747 0.0861772015684 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0210843373494 0.021408717616 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0180722891566 0.011925033212 152% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1881.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04823151125 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353697749196 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311897106109 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209003215434 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147909967846 0.137316102897 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16067193583 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.037074148 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498392282958 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.1252263312 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2941176471 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9508102256 49.517814964 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.647058824 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 49.483828258 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.40659340659 1.69124875643 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462100479138 0.332605444948 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101397569974 0.102741220458 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.087899832376 0.0668466124924 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.546261124322 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151888595666 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195942393651 0.134430193775 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737043486493 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.385489548232 0.324371583561 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0271119588256 0.0638462369009 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324368601476 0.228012699653 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598022122151 0.058150111329 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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