Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Universities should have equal ratio of number accepting both male and female pupils for every subject they offer. This essay agrees that it should accept numbers of both gender for the benefits of the students. This essay will first look on why it should be equal and explain the benefits of male and female who gets subjects with the same number of students.
In terms of studying it should not have limitations. All the materials, knowledge gain, lectures to have, both gender should have it all. Subjects are just subjects. It does not define what gender to be accepted for the given subject. Females have the right also to know more knowledge too when a subject is more about the course or work of males . Males also should study subjects which are more in favor of females topics. For example, I have a female friend who have an IT course. This course is dominant of male gender but eventhough female is rare of this course she enrolled it because she wants to help for the improvement of the world. As of today, the number of genders enrolling for this course is equal.
In the benefits of both male and female, both gender could have a work with no gender issues. Males can do work of the females if there is no available for for him. For the females they can also do the jobs of the males if they really need to work. For example here in the Philippines, for the previous years all of the public transportations drivers are males but nowadays, you can also see females who drives a tricycle as their work jobs.
In conclusion, colleges should accept equal numbers of enrollees for both gender in every subjects they like for the pupils to have more knowledge, not to be curious and ignorant of each subjects that the universities have. Both gender should have equal knowledge so that they can also do the opposite gender jobs and have an experience for the other works they could have. To be free of ignorance and poverty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59077809798 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33929049581 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42939481268 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1400228692 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8421052632 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279050598973 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112828531295 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857827684195 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205225317186 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892724144137 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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